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Not Reacting Well By Macapacarons-d7z4npl by Butter-Cups

“She's gone bananas.”

Nehi nodded vigorously at Avril's words. Not that she really understood. She'd heard 'bananas' and just wanted some.

But to any person with a brain, the Naga's assessment of their Mermaid's housemate was completely founded.

Leaning back in a large above ground pool, Meguro nearly filled the whole thing by herself, a distended and sloshing gut erupting from the top of the water, or what was left of it. Much of the water had been forced out of the pool when the tubby fishgirl pulled her already then sizable gut into the drink, and more so as the day went by and by and by, far into the night. As Meguro had not stayed just plump.

Earlier that day, Avril watched as two grey jump-suit wearing men wheeled a gigantic tankard of something out by the pool. After attaching a hose to it, they left and Meguro wheeled herself out to the yard, grabbed one end of the hose, and jumped it.

Avril stared at the tankard now and read the words 'Bubblebody' on the side of the bright green canister. The fizziest drink legally available.

“Of course that's what she'd suckle down...” Avril grumbled. Mermaids did not react to carbonation normally. Two things happened. Frist: they bloated. And Avril knew that if she looked beneath the surface of the pool, she'd see just how much of that stuff Meguro had gulped down in a single afternoon... and she knew it wasn't going to be pretty.

“Hey. Heeeeeey... HEY! Shaushage Assh! I'm talking to you, Shcaley!” Meguro had removed the nozzle from her waiting mouth long enough to notice Avril standing outside the pool.

Avril rolled her eyes. And there was effect number 2. They got HAMMERED.

“Yeah?” She asked, deciding to amuse the wasted Mermaid, who stared at her with one eye wide open, and the other drifting off to sleep.

“I *hic I love you guysh. C-come here and give me a hug...” Meguro opened her arms wide, exposing her plumped up tits. So full, her teacup sized nipples were straining through her tops, and Avril could trace their every curve.

Avril shook her head. Honestly? Just to see Meguro's reaction.

“FINE!... I'll come over there... just give me *hic a second...” Meguro twisted and turned in her position, splashing more and more water out onto the already soaked grass, her slick form glinting in the white glow of the yard lights. It seemed to be a huge effort, and she didn't seem to be able to do much past making her run out of breath. That is, until she began to rock forward instead.

After a few minutes of Avril giggling madly at Meguro's attempts to get over to her, the Mermaid finally managed to lunge forward... the resulting wave splattered Arvil from dry to soaking wet in a second. For when Meguro finally made her way to the front of the pool, huge bubbling gut squishing down the side of the wall, her back side finally emerged and surged forward. And with all the weight, the pool snapped forward and flung it's little remaining water in the Naga's face.

Meguro, beached on her own lawn, drooling and dazed, didn't seem to care that she busted her pool. Indeed, she looked extremely proud of what she acomplished this day. Her mountain of fatty tuna bottom wobbled excitedly with the force of her impact for many more seconds, and even the light night chill felt nice against her quivering ass.

“Now that I'm here... wut'd I want from ya again?”

“You wanted help getting to bed.” Avril lied, smiling.

“Ah, yesh... I'm awfully.... shleepy...”

And before Avril needed to figure out a way to move her, Meguro fell asleep, her giant mouth snoring and pouring her own dizzy drool into her slippery cleavage.

Another bite sized, this time written for Maca as practice between doing homework and finishing up another big story that some of you might have seen the pic for already :U
My headcanon has it that mermaids bloat on soda... deal with it.
As for people who are unfamiliar with the characters... I apologize :U This was written for Maca to post with the pic and he told me just to do it myself, so I'll link to the other pics here:
Monster girl summer~ by Macapacarons 
Monster girl summer 2~ by Macapacarons 
Monster Girl Summer 3~ by Macapacarons 
.:Vampire Trivia:. by Macapacarons 
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Thickstick22 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
Sincerely, a very cool story.
MuffinTopManor Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I fricken love this
Captainfuckbus Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
may that pool rest in peace
superanonymous13 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
Plastered mermaids. How has this never happened before? XD
Butter-Cups Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Cause it's dumb :U
superanonymous13 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
You mean hilarious -w-
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